Thanks, Pablo! Honest question for feedback: Do you think it resolves too quickly? I was trying so hard to have something ready for the deadline, and I'm thinking it needs a second pass to build to that final moment better.
Awesome, thanks for answering. It's nice to get a second opinion on adding more, cuz that's a dangerous game to play with a story if it doesn't need it.
Love the emotional arc
Thanks, Pablo! Honest question for feedback: Do you think it resolves too quickly? I was trying so hard to have something ready for the deadline, and I'm thinking it needs a second pass to build to that final moment better.
So, it’s not that rushed, but it would benefit from a pass (and tbh what doesn’t?).
It does stand as it is imo, but, at least an additional beat to breathe would serve it well, it would hit harder.
Awesome, thanks for answering. It's nice to get a second opinion on adding more, cuz that's a dangerous game to play with a story if it doesn't need it.