This was really fun to read. There are so many cool weird ideas. I love all the specificity and rambling rhythms. I half expected cyborg Hunter S. Thompson to show up but then rip his synthetic skin off to reveal Jerry Cornelius. Happy you finished. Now you’ve made space to write something else.
It’s fucking great. Admittedly I’m only about halfway through it and have to put it down temporarily but I love it. Didn’t know you had comedy in the tool box as well.
This was really fun to read. There are so many cool weird ideas. I love all the specificity and rambling rhythms. I half expected cyborg Hunter S. Thompson to show up but then rip his synthetic skin off to reveal Jerry Cornelius. Happy you finished. Now you’ve made space to write something else.
So appreciate the kind words, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. And you've given me a fine idea for a follow-up, haha.
Fantastic work!
It’s fucking great. Admittedly I’m only about halfway through it and have to put it down temporarily but I love it. Didn’t know you had comedy in the tool box as well.
Damn, if you’re giving me that glowing a review for half a story, I can’t wait to hear wait you think of the rest.
excited to read this!!!!!
So excited for you to read it! I hope you’ll let me know what you think of it!
i will fasho.